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Color My World




Erase my heartache

every cloud of despair

give me a fresh slate

help me find tranquility

color my world

 

 

 

white

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Prompt: White Crayon
20 Words or less

A contest entry

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Comments

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  • Arizona Sunset
    June 30, 2008

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    hey brother sweetie dear...when you find this place let me know...cuz I am soooooooooo joining you for a tea party here!!! lol best to you in the contest


  • Valley Girl silver member
    June 27, 2008

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    I Love this!
    I think this is my new favs. of yours.
    I like the renewal feeling with this.
    If only...
    Great write! ♥


  • mysticstorm gold member
    May 27, 2008

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    Very smooth and simple with so much power...the meaning is heart felt and the ending beautiful...lovely flow...thank you for sharing!


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    May 27, 2008

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    WoW my friend this is so good.
    You are perfect at packing your pieces
    with hope. I love this piece from you.
    Your ending is remarkable. Great job.

    Loveandblessings2u & yours always
    Joyce


  • Lil-Bit Crazy
    May 26, 2008

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    awwwwww another beautiful one... you just soooooo darn good.. i like reading all you write... thank you for sharing and goood luck in contest...!


  • michellemybelle gold member
    May 25, 2008
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    I love your ending. Nice take on the prompt! good luck.
    Michelle

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