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Making A Difference

Hero's they are

Some we can't see

But, in our hearts

They will forever be

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  • aeolia
    June 13, 2008

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    To make a noun plural, you add an -s or -es -- for example, "cars," "babies," "heroes." Apostrophes are used to signify possession ("Ellen's house"), not plurality.

    Thus, in the first line, it's "heroes," not "hero's."

    -Cristina


  • Desire gold member
    May 29, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Making A Difference
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ I was getting the words instantly upon inhaling Your verse: So True
    I kept seeing Angels~ and scenes from City of Angels
    where they are everywhere All around us~
    Being shown reference to 911 also- Not just from the War but daily battles when disaster strikes
    Also a reference to the faces with names that are not seen but their contributions Appreciated for every Voice counts~
    Phrase: Imagine the difference made and imagine how different it would be if Individuals-Heroes did not step up to the plate...
    What a state our Nation would be in
    I keep getting
    Hopefully that makes sense
    Powerful images You have brought forth

    These words grabbed and pulled~
    Some we can't see
    Touching Voice spoken (Message)~

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~~*~