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You Just Knew

Picking up my pieces.
He assembled them,
and handed them back to me.
I'm redefined!

Author notes

I used the lyrics line - "And then a hero comes along"
by; Mariah Carey

A contest entry

Overlook made up words

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  • Desire gold member
    May 29, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: You Just Knew
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ I was getting the words: Hurrican Katrina
    as a reference for some reason~
    Now I am being shown a Bible and also the word: Bible-
    but word: passage and a marker reference to Corinthians and Paul Being shown a kitten...and this kitten has wings...like Angel wings
    Also images of knitting with yarn~
    Hearing words: Sweet Potato pie- but also homemade and what looks like an ivory cream like a dollop of cream but also homemade
    Reference to 'baby back ribs' and a cajun rub...(what sounds like a cajun ru
    hearing phrase: 7 herbs and spices but sounds like 14
    Like this Colonel has nothing on me type of feel
    (KFC)Interestingly enough hearing words: Fannie Mae...
    and what looks like numbers: 1849
    Ancestry and reference to the railroad-
    With this..I'm being shown...phrase: Free At Last-
    but got word: captured and being shown a lynching sadly
    however getting emphasis on Lives saved by this dastardly deed done
    Getting words: dastardly deed done
    Young children were able to escape apparently~ which was more important at the time...
    Hopefully that makes sense
    Powerful images You have brought forth

    These words grabbed and pulled~
    I'm redefined
    Touching Voice spoken (Message)~

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~~*~


  • individuality gold member
    May 26, 2008

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    a good piece of poetry, like a jigsaw puzzle of emotions, then the whole is smooth with love as another comes in to smile.