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My lips will deny
what the heart really feels
Cold hearted emotions
possessing the thrilled

Its you that I want
Its you I will love
Its you and I forever
I cant get enough

Sometimes I seem cold
Sometimes I seem rare
Occasionally sarcastic
with a hateful glare

You have no idea
how hard it is for me
To have something special
stay devotedly

I know that you try
I see you work hard
to convince me it's ok
to let down my guard

We know what we have
between us two
That keeps things so special
through all we go through



**unfinished**

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  • DenyMyLove
    May 30

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    Wow this is very good for being unfinished!!!! Let me know when you are done with it I would love to read the completed version!!!!
    ~DAWN~

  • CrystaL Dreamz
    May 28
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    Very Pretty Poem sounds like you have alot of confusion going on.

  • loneArt
    May 26

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    so far it's interesting. the last line kinda throws me though, the use of the same word twice:'through all we go through'. would like to see the finish however.


    • MY lips will deny
      May 26
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      good insight. and agree with you. lots to edit as i go along, and any opinions are apreciated. hoping it wont be such a simplified poem when i get done. thanks HAPPY MEMORIAL TO YA. hope all is as well as can be.