There is no day
I do not remember you.
There is no way
I'll forget.
Author notes
My heart is with my brothers on that wall -- always.
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 15 Words VI - by Desire.
925 points, ended May 29, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: My Brothers
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ I was getting the word: twin...
and reference to two peas in the same pod phrasing~
Now while reading I kept hearing the words: Did not die in vain Got the word: Scared- but also being shown word: Grandmother with words: Peaceful transition- being shown hand in hand...
like one hand in another and wild as it sounds...also got word: Father-
seeing two individuals hugging- I'm trying to describe without confusing but what it looks like and what I am being shown...
example: The President greeting troops- thanking them for their service there are many sitting down all around...shaking hands-embrace
With that in Mind~ translate that into the realm where Spirits dwell and again hearing word: Father
doing that...thanking him and others who crossed over for their service etc
that is just what I am being shown while reading Your words
I keep hearing: He is not alone, He is not alone
Never was...and being shown while fighting- hearing
[each one an individual but they are connected]
word: fighting
always another Soldier there by his side
it was like a kinship formed when one enters the military
Getting reference to A Band of Brothers~ they are like family- So many images come that I'm trying to decipher~ overwhelming-
For some reason...I am not being given word them...but him...
Hopefully that makes sense
Powerful images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
There is no way I'll forget
Touching Voice spoken (Message)~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~~*~
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Thank you for the time and caring you invested in your remarks on my entry in your contests. I understood the references made by Spirit. Thank you again.
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Wow. So much emotion and pain in so few words.
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Yes. Thank you for reading and commenting.
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You have spoken what I have thought - they are remembered every day, with love and regret, by those who were with them, not just on one day of the year.
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Once you have been touched by soldier, either a "brother by blood" or a "brother in arms" you never forget them. Your words are heart felt. Juls
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