Dear my beloved,
I just wanted to say
I love you dearly and
Thanks for walking into
My life unexpectedly
Your precious touch
Makes me shiver all over
I love how you kiss me
So passioned and understanding
When you talk to me
My heart just races
Making me want
To skip a beat twice
As fast
The moments we share together
It will last
Forever and always
We will make it last
Our bond is strong
Our love is pure
Each time I see you
I get butterflies
In my stomach
You're the best thing
That walked into my life
I thank god for having you
For showing you love me
Pouring your kindess
All over me
As it turns to dust
Getting inside me
Filling my broken heart
With all your kindness and love
Making million pieces rejoin and
Burst inside me making
Me want to scream
Your name out loud
In the middle of nowhere
You always make me feel special
I love you forever and always will
You're my everything send from above
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aweee
this was soo cute. I could really feel the emotion and the words flowed nicely. Well done
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inside of me is waiting for you
come and hold my hands
touch my tips of fingers. play a valvety song of your choice
nice write
very good indeed
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It litterally dragged a tear out of my eye
Oh Love is such a beautious thing
i loved this style liek writting to a person. Its also a great song by the finich Xd nicely done -
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Thanks for the comment
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Yes i Do, it ws so cute ^-^
I liekd yourway of showing your passion, Only lil thing: chekc where you make another stanza, It kind of is a lil choppy, Or jsut use comas, But it was very sweet
And Love seems to really bring out your best work
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VERY SWEET!!!!
Being in love and having it returned it the most wonderful feeling in the world!
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This is so beautiful.
So honest. It reflects love purely.
Not many people can write from their heart like this.
great write hun. xx
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wow
You truly are a great poet, well done, good job with this,
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thanks so much for the kind words and lovely comment I am glad you liked it
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a very grt love letter
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once again truly amazing poem!
you truly know how to write, promise to never stop??
keep you chin up=]
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Wow the passion in this poem is truly outstanding. I am a softy when it comes to love poems, and this is one unlike any I have ever read. This poem being written as if it was a love letter; that was amazing. Great write!
Adam
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Your precious touch
Makes me shiver all over
I love how you kiss me
So passioned and understanding
i really love this part of the poem. this was a very unique style to write in and i dont thin ki have read anything like it before. very sweet, great work
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I like this. It is interesting and written well. Thanks for sharing this. And thanks for entering it into my contest. Good write you should be very proud of it.
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This was Cute, I have a thing for Love poems, and this hit the spot. Your feelings seem to just speak from this. Great write!
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Very sweet.
I like this poem sincere love just seems to flow through it. You've done well.
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i like it alot i like the idea of a poem being a letter and its really sweet .x.
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OF COURSE I LIKE THIS
no... i love it <3
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awe, this for your lovely comment
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So beautiful, what a lovely write. Sorry you no longer feel like this
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wow if only we could all find this in our lifes, well me im still waiting boo hoo!!
anyway i really enjoyed reading this it gives me hope that there are some good people put there.
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wow
can iuse this to ask a girl out. perfect
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Hehe really that's awesome and thanks
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I really liked the way this was written, but I have to admit that the way you spaced out the lines to make them so short got a little annoying. The phrases seemed chopped and I think would flow smoother if combined together in the right places. Your emotions expressed here are beautiful.
Pouring your kindess
All over me
As it turns to dust
Getting inside me
Filling my broken heart
With all your kindness and love
Making million pieces rejoin and
Brust inside me making
Me want to scream
Your name out loud
In the middle of nowhere
lovely metaphor. (might wanna fix brust to burst though)
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Aww, I can see why this is one of your favorites :] It's so beautiful, dear, and full of so much truth & love. It's great that you have somebody like this in your life ! ♥
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I simply
d this! awesome feelings!
Your a finalist! take care,
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wow what a beautiful poem full of loving emotions from a loved heart touching the reader heart as the emotions travel up and down the ink spilled words beautiful poem
I enjoyed the following stanzas
Thanks for walking into My life unexpectly Your precious touch Makes me shiver all over I love how you kiss meSo passioned and understanding When you talk to meMy heart just races Getting inside me Filling my broken heart With all your kindness and love good luck in the contest
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This was wonderfully written and I loved the emotions shown in it. Well done.
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Ah...the strings of love and the music of the heart is heart in the every word of this verwse..well done..my thanks for sharing it
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=] Awwwh!!!! xD RyanxMaria! >.> Sitting in a Tree K-I-S-S-I-N-G!!! ^_^ Hehe
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