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Sleep well you heros beneath the crosses.
You’ve earned a warriors sleep.
Thank You, Job well done.

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  • Desire gold member
    December 3
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    Welcome Back!

    Thank You for Your Entry: Sleep
    Appreciate Your Talent also for sharing Voice~
    Honored to read this once more~Adding more *clappies*
    also best wishes to You in this 40 Words or less PW contest
    This will be judged shortly
    Thank You for Your Patience
    Many blessings too Precious Spirit
    with much love and light~ Desire~*~

  • piccola silver member
    May 22
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    So sad that this is the case for so many fine men.


  • Desire gold member
    February 1
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    Welcome Welcome!!

    Thank You for sharing Your Gems of Wisdom~

    I'm Blessed to read Your verse again~
    Honored to have You enter~
    Many blessings to You in my contest Sweet Soul
    Best wishes & judging will be done shortly
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Desire gold member
    January 29
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    Welcome Back!!

    Thank You for sharing Your Words from the Heart~

    I'm Blessed to read Your verse again~
    Honored to have You enter~
    Many blessings to You in my contest Sweet Soul
    Best wishes & judging will be done shortly
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Desire gold member
    May 29, 2008
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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Sleep
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ I was instantly shown the Tomb of the Unknown Soldier and a box of dog tags as if holding them in hopes of connecting to a body- a soldier eventually Hearing word: Trinkets
    As if a part of a soldiers Life was kept in what looks like a shoebox~ Now for some reason hearing: 1967-
    and word: Louisiana...hearing words: boy-Soldier-Man
    like in stages-...age 17
    died on the field and reference to him- the grass absorbed his youth, the dirt absorbed his Pride...Nudged to mention that
    A piece of him will always remain back in the war-the place where the war started and ended his Life~ and wild as it sounds...I'm shown a hand with
    dog tags clasped in the palm as if the soldier down but like this feeling of don't ever forget me...here are my tags~like take me with You feeling
    Hopefully that makes sense
    Powerful images You have brought forth

    These words grabbed and pulled~
    Job well done
    Touching Voice spoken (Message)~

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~~*~


    • Beret55 silver member
      May 29, 2008
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      A lot of good men ended up as a dog tag in someones hand. Nothing more to show what valor they had done. Whose lives they saved, or tried to save. How well they fought and what dreams they were living for. Just thrown in with other dog tags.

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