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The Sole's Journey

Smooth sand glides under a sole
Guiding the way
Leaving an impression behind

Cool grass tickling a sole
Tracing the grooves
Sparking a feeling

Warm water flows through a sole
Cleansing it's nature
Refreshing the mind

Author notes

soles, souls, soles....what are we left to ponder...

apparently i have no soul...but in fact they still hurt...

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  • Melodies
    June 2, 2008

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    A wonderful poem filled with words that can work two different ways. Homophones... good to play with!