Giving you songs
of my soul.
Deepest blood
in my heart
to be your sacrifice.
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A contest entry
- quickie... by Gypsy-Princess.
400 points, ended May 26, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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So deeply expressive and mysteriously engaging... x
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Very deep and mysterious, darkly romantic stuff!!! Good one dude!!!


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simply stated but conveying such powerful emotion. love the ending!! well done and best of luck!!!


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A dark love poem...(as revealed by the b/g)
"to be your sacrifice."
Like this ending...it's simple, succinct and sacrificial. -
This is so touching and beautiful! All the best..


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