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Decanting My Wine






Giving you songs
of my soul.

Deepest blood
in my heart

to be your sacrifice.





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  • So deeply expressive and mysteriously engaging... x

  • Ithica silver member
    May 25
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    Very deep and mysterious, darkly romantic stuff!!! Good one dude!!!


  • Weltt silver member
    May 25

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    simply stated but conveying such powerful emotion. love the ending!! well done and best of luck!!!


  • notorious silver member
    May 25

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    A dark love poem...(as revealed by the b/g)

    "to be your sacrifice."
    Like this ending...it's simple, succinct and sacrificial.

  • crimsondew silver member
    May 25
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    This is so touching and beautiful! All the best..

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