Some days seem to go on forever
And the nights an endless point of view
Because tomorrow seems so far away from here
Guess I've just got them lonesome, homesick blues
Oh! if only I knew somewhere she'd be waiting
And if I could feel her heart beating here beside me
I would not go wandering - no, not ever
I would stay here locked behind closed doors
It's hard to see when your eyes are blinded
By all the misery that there is all around
And it's harder still sometimes to remember
As the echoes of the past remain so still
Oh! if only sometimes I could hear you calling
Because sometimes I can forget my own name
And if I could have you here once more beside me
No! I'd never, ever leave your side again
There's so much beauty in the boundless, swirling ocean
It can fill up any void that's plain to see
But a love worth having is the one worth saving
It can last beyond and into eternity
Oh! if only sometimes I could hear you calling
Because sometimes I can forget my own name
And if I could have you here once more beside me
No! I'd never, ever leave your side again
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Comments
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really nice job and thank you for entering
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ty and gl
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Beautiful. Stays true to the song of ones heart....well done.
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Sounds like it would make a pretty good song.
I thought the first verse was realy the heart of the song. filled with a lot of emotion.
Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest -
WoW! I can definitely see how this translates into a song. I like when you say "Guess I've just got them lonesome, homesick blues". Great write!
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I will comment once the contest is nearly finished
best of luck
plx comment me
-midgetbridgey -
great job! good luck!
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Excellent!
Very very nice. Definately excellent
"Oh! if only sometimes I could hear you calling
Because sometimes I can forget my own name
And if I could have you here once more beside me
I'd never, ever leave your side again"
BEAUTIFUL.
Absolutely amazing. Thank you for entering my contest!
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