please forgive me i hope you do
how much i cried that night for you
havent you ever felt a time
when frustrations build and your emotions climb
and then it all comes out at once
and then you realize you were a dunce
it just so happens you were there
when i started to curse, curse and swear
you dont know what ive been going through
and i hope that we can start anew
for i have no more tears to cry
and if you do no i may possibly die
please please forgive me
so we can live peacefully
Author notes
please dan if you were reading this please forgive me! i beg of you
dan and you know what one you are if you are reading this it is for you
Comments
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Very swell done
I like this it reminds me of how i hurt many people in my life but i never asked them to forgive me
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I loved this poem... this flows so well and it's beautiful. I can relate to it.
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A deep, honest, sincere apology I must say. I hope Dan forgives you. Here's a smile
for good luck.
Thanks for sharing.
Brian -
i am an idiot
the third last line is supposed to have a t at the end of no beside the do sorry for the spelling errors!
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