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Reserved

Reserved Place

How special it it feels,

this offer to reserve for me,

a spot in a contest this unique.

Send me my word today,

For a challenge, I feel ready,

so unleash my creativity.

Barbara Campbell (c)2008

A contest entry

Any comments or suggestions will be welcome, but I want to know if the rhyme works and whether the imagery brings forth a stark image of a cloudy gray rainy day?

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Comments

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  • x Gemini x
    June 11, 2008
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    Ok, I found out who you are...and to make it fair...I will write your comment here for the one you posted on my poem.

    "Thank you for entering my contest.

    This is an interesting take on force. Nice use of detail...I could sort of feel it. Nice "


  • x Gemini x
    June 10, 2008

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    I think you misunderstood...

    Your poem for this contest should be on this post ...I noticed you posted something in response to one of my poems that could be considered the entry for this contest. If that's so...please post it here.

  • x Gemini x
    May 25, 2008
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    Your word is:

    Force

  • ms.b.e.m.c.
    May 25, 2008
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    Patty 4500 is welcome to edit if she feels it necessary to improve the poem. ms.b.e.m.c.


    • pattyann4500
      May 26, 2008
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      Aren't you a sweetie. I would love to read your poem. Make sure you let me know when it is ready.

  • ms.b.e.m.c.
    May 25, 2008
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    this comment should not have carried over to this contest entry. Sorry. ms.b.e.m.c.

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