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motivation

motivation takes you high beyond the stars
it gives you the strength to journey near and far
when you feel like giving up; you just about had enough
makes you a warrior; strong, hard, and tough
we all need a little push to reach to success
aim high; don't settle for less
motivation gives the cheetah its speed to catch its prey
or the lion its strength to protect its herd and pride
it gives you a huge boost
when you think you don't have it, it will come out wild and loose

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this might not be so bad.

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  • x Gemini x
    June 10, 2008

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    Thank you for entering my contest.

    Unique. Very creative! I really liked:

    "motivation gives the cheetah its speed to catch its prey
    or the lion its strength to protect its herd and pride
    it gives you a huge boost
    when you think you don't have it, it will come out wild and loose"

    Nicly done


  • echo-ink
    June 10, 2008

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    Yessa'

    I liked this line best: Motivation gives the cheetah it's speed to catch it's prey, 'cause he's Hungry!!!
    I'm glad I only have to motivate to the fridge, hehehe, Good job and good luck in the contest!!!


  • mrocun
    May 26, 2008
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    This is a really cool poem
    I'll remember this one in hard times
    nice work

  • x Gemini x
    May 25, 2008
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    Your word is:

    Motivation