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attack of the killer barbies!!!~

attack of the killer barbies!
attack of the killer barbies!
they'll suck your brain out
they'll have a huge stake-out!
all your intestines included 
you'll wish you were excluded
When it is attack of the killer barbies!
attack of the killer barbies!
They will boast
you'll be diagnosed
with barbiephobia
and wish you only had the slightest of cancer phobia

Because it's attack of the KILLER barbies

attack of the KILLER barbies!
    (X's3)






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gummy bears will soon take over the earth!(I hope you like funny poems!)

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  • misshugglebugglez
    November 30, 2008

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    woah that is funny! haha loved it... but i think ya just gave me barbiephobia hee hee XD
    that was awesome!!! it was fabulously written nice work =)


    • SmartBrick
      November 30, 2008
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      YA!I think my poem gave MANY people the newly found disease(Credits to me),Barbiephobia.Thanks for commiting, hope the Barbies don't get cha!


  • Iris Doyle
    August 16, 2008
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    hah. thats sooo funny!!!!!!!


  • xxhoopstar21xx
    June 14, 2008
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    and congrats!!

  • xxhoopstar21xx
    June 14, 2008

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    lol that is funny!!! *imitates ATTACK OF THE KILLER BARBIES AND PRETENDS TO BE A NIGHT IN SHINY ARMOR!! LOL* great poem!!

  • bobby3332321
    June 10, 2008
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    wow

    That is original lol I am afraid to walk any wear the toy store now lol


  • islekine gold member
    June 7, 2008
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    LOL>>>>we used to sing about Barbie

    and G.I. Joe........anyway...this is cute...if you took out most of the "and" s you would have an even smoother poem...if you just took the first three out..
    and left it as is...and replaced the last one with
    you'll. anyway just suggestions...my final score will come at end of judging..Best wishes...
    Write on!
    *PEACE*


  • aeolia
    June 3, 2008

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    I'm not sure why you revert to chatspeak (u, ur) randomly when the rest of the poem is written normally.

    And Barbies are evil things. I used to rip the heads off mine when I was a kid.

    -Cristina

    • SmartBrick
      June 4, 2008
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      Sorry...part force of habit and partly because I was in kinda a hurry. I needed to right that poem....For evil purposes of course!


  • Miss Chievous
    May 26, 2008
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    GO KT!!!!!!


    • SmartBrick
      May 26, 2008
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      Hey i wrote the WHOLE thing!She just asked 4 help!So i did!~

      signed confused


  • crazymomma
    May 25, 2008

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    Are you really only twelve? This is so well written it is hard to believe you are already so talented. This is a really cool poem.


  • SmartBrick
    May 25, 2008
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    "i like it" she says with a big grin...(My sister!~)

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