Get out of this world,
Save me from this place,
I want to run away,
To see your amazing face.
You show me I can make it,
You help me live my life,
You take away my blade,
And help me put down the knife.
You make me want to live,
So show them I can do it,
You're my best friend,
And now I know I'm worth it.
My life was pointless,
Gone without you,
You gave me meaning,
And to you I'll always be true.
A contest entry
- Help by DeathlyAngel.
375 points, ended June 6, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Good or no?
Comments
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It is good, a great job. At first i didn't think it fit wat i wanted but i read it through and i realize I can relate to it and that my friend always saved me from me even if they didn't realize it. We haven't been close lately b/c I now something is wrong and they won't tell me but I hope that the poems that well be entered in the contest well help me say what I wanted to say.
Great job and good luck in my contest
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very good
you dont give yourself enough credit. every poem ive read by u is really good. i can definitly relate to this. isnt it good to know that there is someone in ur life who can help u. they dont even have to do much at all. im glad u found that person. i hope u continue to get better!
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