qwerty keyboard
up all night
have to get
my fingers right
aspirin taken
get a clue
classes over
paper due
A contest entry
- 20 words or less [open all day] by blackday.
700 points, ended May 31, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Considering the poems you awarded prizes too i can't take your criticism seriously...funny maybe but the only poetic devices people on here like are depression, poor spelling, and over dramatization.
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This is kind of funny, but is really lacking in my poetic devices or depth in meaning to me. Just not my cup of tea.
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Many a night I sat and typed the hours away, knowing that I had a paper due the next day. Your words made me smile as I remembered. Juls
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Ahhh those college days (LOL)... vaguely remembered but forever imprinted on the soul. Well done with humor and warmth...
Ken
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