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Vehement

In passionate embrace I call your name

for within my heart you light this flame,

this warmth spreads right into my soul

to be always with you is my one, true goal.

 

Upon heaven's shores we breathe in harmony

together as one, yet feeling free,

this fire is most intense when you're by my side

forever with you I shall abide.

 

With fierce whispers the fire becomes intense

and my reason for living truly now makes sense,

these fervent feelings shine within our eyes

and I know I have found earth's finest prize.

 

As embers are fanned and begin to roar

a whole new world has opened its door,

in ardent discovery we'll walk down this new road

as the rainbows we cherish endlessly explode.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • echo-ink
    June 10, 2008

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    I thought this

    was beautiful, I love rhyme, there is a lot of 'Vehement' passion going on in this write, loved it. good luck in the contest.


  • x Gemini x
    June 10, 2008
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    Thank you for entering my contest.

    I defiantly like this one.

    It's captured one of those vehement things - emotion, particularly Love. And with really good flow and use of language.

    My favorite thing is the comparison to fire, and how the fire's stages were all sort of incorporated into each stanza


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 27, 2008
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    Oooo cool word! Let me know when this is done so I can read


  • x Gemini x
    May 25, 2008
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    Your word is:

    Vehement