Listen to the wind as it blows silently
Let the tears dry before they run down soft cheeks
Keep yourself from letting the sorrow take over
Just listen to the sounds and breathe deep
True that the sorrow is becoming overwhelming
But just be strong and know it will all pass
Listen to the wind as it brings forth the rain
Listen to the beat of the water upon the ground
Breathe deep and let the tears dry before they fall
It may seem hard but you must learn to be strong
The sorrow of heartbreak. The sorrow of loss.
Be strong litte one for the moment is almost gone.
The tears will dry and the sorrow will leave.
All you have to do is relax and breathe
Fight the sorrow. Fight the pain.
Just be strong and breathe so you can be free.
This will end soon so just relax and listen
Listen to the raindrops and to the wind
Sorrow of loss, heartache and of all the pain...
It will end soon just relax and breathe.
Relax and breathe and soon you will see
That this will all be like a horrible dream.
Author notes
To represent those who are consumed with sorrow and telling them it will all be well soon.
O.O I really suck at these kinds of contests
A contest entry
- Impromptu by x Gemini x.
525 points, ended June 11, 2008, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Gosh you went from man slayer to consoling friend you should listen to this poem more often yourself lmao .
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I liked it although it was kind of confusing..but lots of detail...thats always a good thing...good luck in the contest...
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Very nice,
Your words are so loving, trying to 'inspire' those who are in sorrow to, breath, hang in there, listen to nature, etc... what a kind person you are. good luck -
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Seeing as I have been in their shoes I felt the need to right my poem on that ^_^ and thanks
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Thank you for entering my contest.
Well, G...Not what I was expecting....it was a bit confusing. But I see the connection...I'm pretty sure
Its good either way! Lots of detail. Lots of emotion. YAY XD
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Well what do you expect?
You know my usual poetry is never inspiring!
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uhh...I am confused
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I have to write a poem for a contest though I'm still thinking of it XD lmfao
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OMG rally? ?? that's so interesting
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I know right?!?!?!
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Your word is:
Inspiration
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