I have learnt to eliminate
all the parts
that people skim across
in order to find what's really there...
Author notes
Your prompt is:
typewriter fingers.
A contest entry
- 20 words or less [open all day] by blackday.
700 points, ended May 31, 2008, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Hmmmmm. Is this profound or is it lame? I'm leaning more towards profound the more I think about it.
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and if we all did that the world would be a better place... great take on prompt and good luck in the contest thank you for sharing this...
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To know the real person is a wonderful gift of friendship. I like where you took this. Juls
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This really made me think... would I want to find out what's really there if I looked deep enough.. the answer is yes.
Excellent write!
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"illiminate"
An intentional typo of "eliminate"?
Very nicely done...definitely suits the prompt.
"to find what's really there...."
Wouldn't we all like to know that?
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I thought it didn't look right. Thanks for that - first time I've ever used that word....
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Excellent take..love where you took this..All the best!
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