I kept my knickers on my hips
As you whipped me with your wit
Lips met and slipped, like lipsalve slicked
Gestures dripped with sense and sweat
As gambling pheromones placed their bet
A ripped wrist took my only wish
Strong appetite fell from my dish
In white faced fury rinsed the thai stick
Took three burns upon the taught spliff
We weren't afraid coz we know what you are,
And you know that we know what you are.
I watched you sink into your heroin ink
Breathing in the choked chemical stink
Grin as a burnt smile drains into thai stick
My blackened lips pouting a cracked hiss
Whilst i wept, a kiss burnt a hole through my cheek
Blind blind blind to your American find,
You no longer kept her from me.
Still I stand sweet.
And we weren't afraid coz we know what you are,
And you know that we know what you are.
The time to ride her was when she was fresher
Her limbs hung too long in her broken dishwasher
Darling you broke her , you innocent scoundrel
Wise with your walk and your talk sounding mating call
But we weren't afraid coz we know waht you are
And you know that we know what you are.
A contest entry
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But we weren't afraid coz we know what you are
And you know that we know what you are.
You say it like it is! well done.
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damn amazing work.
this is beyond excellent. my favorite rhyming poem. to date. ever. wonderful wonderful wonderful.
what a frenzy of emotion. it's nearly insane but that's what makes it so fresh. so delightfully amazing. so... deliciously awesometastic.
i can't even begin singing praises for this. it's far too great.
excellent work. best wishes and best of luck. -
you have sketched the life which is sometimes good and sometimes bad as well..but yes it is always a factor to invite the attentions..
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