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Love’s scars


My heart is torn
My mind split
These scars that you cause
The pain that they bring

This thoughts that come
From these scars that you made
These thoughts that you bring
Tier me so

My love has gone
These scars made it go
Your memory made me mad
Your dream made me sad

Come back to fix this scars
To erase this feelings of sorrow
Come back my love come to mend
What you broke

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  • Intricate Wordsmith
    May 28, 2008
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    Good luck in my contest.


  • wolfwatcher
    May 27, 2008

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    Thats very sad. Thats one thing I hope to never do, is leave scars on another. Very good write, and good luck!


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    May 26, 2008

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    A very emotional poem that brings imagery in clear shapes fast as I read the words.
    Nicely penned

    ♥
    Enjoy AllPoetry
    Stay safe
    ~Manda
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