across a keyboard
of life
fingers dance
their own tune
uncaring of
who is watching
listening to
just a beat
Author notes
Prompt: Typewriter fingers
A contest entry
- 20 words or less [open all day] by blackday.
700 points, ended May 31, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Hmm. Plainly put but it still has a good meaning. The poem wasn't the best in technicality to me. That's my only thing.
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creating poetry on a keyboard is the only way I write anymore. There is something about touch and chatter of keys helps me speak my language. Beautifully, simply, done.
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what a great thought rolled into a poem about typewriter fingers..quite enjoyed this Juls, hope you do well in the contest
Cin
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lol no snakes in this one! Love, C
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This is beautiful! All the best!
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Loved this, and my muse can be a bit of a workaholic at times as I too have found myself furiously tapping the keys into the wee hours. All the best in the contest dear.
Love and peace always,
mj.
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Seems my muse is working overtime again, becomes wide awake and full of thought when I should be asleep. Love Juls
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