The sun peeks out from behind a cloud,
As if to say in words out loud,
I’m here to warm the coldness brought,
By troublesome worries and saddened thoughts,
I bring good cheer to end your lament,
And to offer you hope in the One that was sent,
Bearing a joyful witness that I live to tell,
Of he who quenches thirst from the living well.
So when darkness surrounds you and closes in,
And all seems lost to your soul within,
Look up to the sky for you’ve nothing to fear,
Where from amongst the clouds the Son will reappear
A contest entry
- Share Your Love by StarEyes.
2150 points, ended June 2, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Aw, this is really pretty, and I feel horrible about having to DQ you, but this contest is for dark poems... I did, however, enjoy your word-play on the title... Very creative indeed! This would have done well in my other contest, one that I did for uplifting poems a while back.
Your words are comforting, and I wish you the best in the other contest. If you do write dark poems, and would like to reenter, then by all means, do. I would love to read more of your work! Better luck next time!
Laura x
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I am a huge fan of the Phantom!
I have my dark side like most people that are honest with themselves.
YOu have a great webpage!
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thank you for you words of comfort and care. I like how you wrote sonshine. there times I do not understand his plan at times. This touched my heart strings.
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Only you
May you feel god's love wrap around you like a warm blanket on a cold winter day.
My heart goes out to you.
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Thanks for this entry into this contest! What a beautiful job on this one! I hope Brenda finds as much comfort from these words that I did!!
Best of luck to you in this contest!
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Great piece here
On the title correct sonshine to sunshine and the last line of last verse make son into sun before the judge reads OK Its a great write
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Thank you
The son is referring to Jesus, drawing a parallel between sun and son.
I appreciate your taking the time to view and comment.
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This is a great write. The last stanza expresses your faith beautifully, and really paints the pictures of your hope and belief. thanks for sharing.
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At first I thought the title might be a typo, then I was like oh, cool! I really enjoyed reading this. Well written with a great message.
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