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Dont know

Baby, I don't wanna die
But there's just no living without you and I.
I've lost you
I've lost me too
I don't know who I am anymore,
can't stand anything I used to adore,
I'm trying my best not to give up,
It's so hard to care about me,
I hate me.
Me's a twat.

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  • aaaaaaaa
    May 25, 2008

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    The first two lines are really good and a great rhyme that flowed nicely. good write, thanks for sharing.


  • libithina
    May 25, 2008
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    Oh dear .. no, poem is good but so sad that you feel so bad much Lib x x