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My Best Friend Is A Desk

Friends are there for you
in your time of need
They help you stand up,
it's guaranteed.

Friends come in all sorts
of shapes and sizes.
They may even wear,
subtle disguises.

Who is your best friend?
you ask, intrigued.
I say: I'll tell you later,
when I'm not fatigued.

Later comes too soon
and did you ever expect?
My best friend, my pal
is my faithful desk!

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  • happy kitty kat
    July 1

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    cool, i really liked it.

    my bro said what the heck but i liked it anyway, you got a good shot i love this kind of write. very nice, best of luck in my contest.


  • sailor ptolema
    May 30, 2008
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    bravo

    heehee, random, yet cute.


  • Darianna
    May 30, 2008

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    I wasn't too sure about the rhyming in the third stanza...but heck, this is a random contest afterall, who says it has to make any sense??? You've done well with the title you were given!

    Thank you for entering this random contest. Sorry it's taken longer than I thought to judge.

    Dari xxx


  • Nakatrea
    May 25, 2008

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    oh so true... very funny and random. perfect for the contest. good luck and nice write. I hope you do well. heheheheh

    Kat ( figured out the AP family thing yet???)


    • shopaholica
      May 25, 2008
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      Thank you
      and no I haven't :S
      I will soon!
      Is it on Wikipedia by any chance?

  • Flamecaster
    May 25, 2008

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    Lol...your pal is always around...helping you write under the light!!...good luck...


  • Justin
    May 25, 2008

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    I see that this in a contest about randomness. The third stanza was well-suited.

    "Who is your best friend?
    you ask, intrigued.
    I say: I'll tell you later,
    when I'm not fatigued."

    That seriously made me say out-loud: "What The Hell?!?!" Then I giggled. This is a very amusing piece.

    • shopaholica
      May 25, 2008
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      Thanks xD
      Well I wanted a word that is kinda like "interested" but fits better into the poem, and I thought of intrigued xD.
      And the only word that actually rhymes with intrigued was fatigued so I just had to fit it into the stanza somehow.
      Lol


  • libithina
    May 25, 2008

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    Mmm yes I can imagine .. tied to the desk .. lol
    greatly expressed s

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