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Soft Heat

One pearled drop

  Shimmering, as it glides

    Over oiled sated skin

      To the pool

        Of quenched passion

           Tenderly love filled

 

     

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  • PerfectImperfection
    June 25

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    OOOh short and very sweet, a nicely woven piece of longing in so few words. Nice form and flow, well penned!


  • CinfullyDelicious
    May 25

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    I love everything about this darl, the title all the words..everything hehe

    Beautiful and brilliant

    Hope you do well in the contest



    Cin

  • Wrinkling Mind silver member
    May 25

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    wow I definitely like this.

    "The pool of quenched passion"

    Is a nice thought. Thanks for the read.

    • tainfinite silver member
      May 26
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      taiinfinite

      cheers thankyou for your comment much appreciated,

  • AmyPixiDust
    May 25

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    wow i really love this poem it is deffinatly passionate thank you for your entry and insite into my life, good luck in the contest and keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy


    • tainfinite silver member
      May 26
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      taiinfinite

      thanks heaps for comment and thanks for running the comp

  • libithina
    May 25

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    What great imagery!! 'one pearled drop' 'glides'
    'over oiled sated skin' s s
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