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Reach

To silence the screams
and all the unwanted lies
have something ready
to commit your suicide.

A contest entry

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  • Blood Magick
    May 28, 2008

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    It's nice. I know how hard it is to Write a good short poem. I like it, and it's nice and subtle. Good luck in the contest =]


  • e m i l y
    May 25, 2008

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    I actually like this one,
    just one thing,
    To silence the screams

    Might need some punctuation or
    it just doesn't make sense.