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Shivers

Breathtaking and egotistical you stand,
Up against that crimson wall
Waiting for me.

I just wanna kiss your scarlet lips
I just wanna drown in your blue lagoon eyes
I just wanna be embraced by your strong arms
I just wanna be loved.

Exchanging our love,
You send shivers down my spine
While you rake my silky back like Autumn leaves

I scream..

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  • Ephiphany gold member
    June 14
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    very nice

    thanks and good luck.
    -e


  • kitty23lover
    May 27
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    hey this is really good nice write and it flows ! keep up the good work!