When I look into your eyes
I see an innocent sadness
that holds the stars
to the darkest night sky.
I see the sun in your eyes
when you smile,
and I see the rains fall
when a single tear falls from your eyes.
She's something beautiful
no one can ever explain
whether its her battle scars
or how she dances in the rain.
Maybe its the way she laughs
to hide the pain she feels,
maybe its the way I want to steal her pain away
but shes beautiful.
Author notes
this is to my girlfriend, Gabrielle Kathrine Savage
te amo
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Comments
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<3 This was a lovely poem.
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This was lovely. I do think you should have kept the same pronoun throughout. You/ she one or the other, but it was still very sweet and lovely
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Such a touching tribute. I like the lines whether it's her battle scars or how she dances in the rain, best. Sweet devotion.
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