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The Rat Dream







I dreamed that a rat was eating my family
and there was nothing I could do but watch.
A mariachi band was playing in the background
and the rat smiled at me speaking casually.
“You need this insanity.” He said.

I went to grab a weapon, but apparently I did not own this dream
because nothing came to mind. I stood there with nothing
as this rat suddenly grew in size and ate my bother and sister
chunk  by bloody chunk.

They were reaching out to me with blood on their hands
but there was nothing that I could do.

Finally mercy came and gave me power over this dream
and with a long scythe I cut the rat down piece by piece.

There was glory in my anger.
Joy found in the evisceration
of this rancid creature.

My dream ended calmly
and I awakened knowing
my life was intact
and everything was okay.









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  • azlyn gold member
    May 25

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    Sounds like some of my psychotic dreams...YIKES! I don't feel so alone now! Best of luck...

    P.S. Don't eat cheese or LSD before bed!!!LOL!

  • yikes! that was a freaky a** ride you made me go on! hmm...freeverse, eh? well, it was very intense and a bit scary, but read very much like a good story! good luck to ya, lumber jack superhero

    *rianna