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The Work

Running.
I'm exhausted.
Plunging into the line
and bending in racing winds.
Throwing my skin upwards
as it rips by me
like lightning.
Daggers of droplets
permiate my muscles
speeding up my pace.
Running.
I'm terrified.
Thunder's celebration
blasting the ear
and forcing me deeper.

Author notes

Picture inspired.

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  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    June 9, 2008
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    A pleasure to read.

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    June 9, 2008

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    This reminds me of a storm you did a very nice job trying to get away from it before it hits thanks for sharing and congrats on your Hm much luck always


  • Samplette gold member
    May 29, 2008

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    A well written piece of poetry. The picture took you out of the box. Nicely written. Thank you for entering.
    Sam


  • Yy13
    May 25, 2008

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    I did a marathon a few weeks ago and the strong combination of words that you use strike a cord with me. Well done.