woman on pillow
pulse heard;
baby co-sleeping
Author notes
good luck isn't great without pain; Isaiah 65:11
please comment without emoticons or applause symbol, thank you
though plant/animal types aren't freakish to me
A contest entry
- Weekend Haiku by azure85.
600 points, ended May 28, 2008, 24 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
it was fun
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woman on pillow
pulse heard;
baby co-sleeping
Ah, this is very interesting. It could be mom and child there, or child-to-be sleeping. Nicely done, thank you so much.
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gladness looked at it
azure85 I'm fantastically pleased
my appreciation is high for your spanned perception and the honorable trophy. I reached for a reaction, but your contest was getting heavy with fun that might have had you move on. thanks, again.
I do take to the work's approval, just not the applause symbol disproprtions and lack of symmetrical color lol for us...
babies are my subject
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Love it - the two of you sleeping to the beat of your heart/pulse!
Or from a more solitary/alone feeling - you, listening to your pulse re-realize who is nearby!
Profound in simplicity - our connections in the world.
Marlene -
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my personal lullaby
Marlene I love the new avatar
I'm thankful for your captivation. isn't it grand to think a young one can get drowsy without being shaken homesick for womb rest on nourishing reassurance...
your second conjecture of what was set before you is closer to my situation... I heard the vibration of my heart's effect at a listening point when laying down and I reflected on similar need and parallel bundling to know life myself, even a fetoscope or awareness in full gently from pregnancy on.
it's going through my head at at rate of emotion,
babies are my subject
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Wonderfull haiku! I love babies and would love to have some - some day. Sleeping next to them is always so comforting, I remember doing so with my baby brothers.
Thanks for sharing this.
Keep well
(as requested I will not add any applause but would have loved to do so)
Himler -
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beautiful response
Himler how nice of you
this did make me put my hand in chin after writing this, smiling wanting another one!
fantastic, expansion of family input you brought in. I know twins from womb like continued constant company towards snooze, not just from mamama's needed recognition... so it makes sense a house of siblings would relax together in slumber to remain close at certain tender ages.
I appreciate your verbal emphasis,
babies are my subject
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Great Haiku...
Isn't that dangerous?
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I'm glad you had a look
sheltered thank you for your interest
I appreciate the compliment and wonder, yet no it's not a notion of concern. actually, I was trying to convey my ear echo's of own heartbeat as auricle was pressed on a malleable mound, it reminded me of the cosleeping comfort... which is very positive, if nursing especially -- safety is within the natural attraction to remain attached and thus secure awareness. it has extra benefit by the normal shifts in dreaming assisting the touched child to have fewer records of sudden infant death syndrome, stimulated from getting caught stagnant. that's of couse aside from bad foam influence of mattress which doesn't help breathing. regular too then, breastfeeding is easily extended with present rhythm.
I did request no applause symbol but thanks for keying in with question for the fascination,
babies are my subject
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