newspaper without story:
love didn’t copyright us,
but we were published
by lust.
now, i write solo
in courier new.
A contest entry
- 20 words or less [open all day] by blackday.
700 points, ended May 31, 2008, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I am slightly shocked you wrote this Tyler. It wasnt your usual style in my eyes. :] & I didn't look at the replies to comments.
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lol i dont really have a style, not lately..so that might be why. i'm still experimenting, trying to create my own i guess. if that makes any sense.
glad you liked it. :]
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Love it. The ending was really amazing to me & yeah. Not much more to saw. Best so far, easily. :]]]]
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I absolutely LOVE your last line. I don't know why, I'm just computer geeky that way. 
this rocked my little toe socks.
~Cassie
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haha thanks
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My favorite in the contest, by far.
Best wishes,
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Thanks
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lol I don't speak chinese, what does this mean? "my cheese?" lol.
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wait a second -
ironically,
your username is spanish. haha -
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heh I knew it was spanish!
and yeah my could be spanish, but it could also be french. some french guy accused me of being french because of my username and started talking to me in french 
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haha if someone did that to me i would be so confused i would probably have to go to google & find a translator.
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haha this is spanish, chico.
"where is my cheese?"
chico = boy
haha
& i'm well aware that you are kind of past the boy stage. :]
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