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Moments stolen

Sometimes,
in the stillness
of moments stolen
I
think
  of
you
and the hurt seeps
in.
The agony of
wanting what can
never be escapes
and breaks free.

One moment turns
in to two and the
tears well up in
eyes red rimmed
from trying so
hard not to cry.
Over
someone
such
as
you

The aching need
now turned to
crimson blood
that only my
heart bleeds.
It tears me up
inside and breaks
me into pieces
with no hope of
repair. Ever.
All
because
I
fell
for
you

Like I have never
fallen for any
other nor ever
will again. Nothing
between my heart
and the floor.
Except
you

Time heals or so
they say. These
moments will become
far between and few.
Until then,
I
think
of
you
and it hurts!

Author notes

Yea....today will be one of those stolen moment days!

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  • Endeavor gold member
    June 15

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    Very Good

    Like I have never
    fallen for any
    other nor ever
    will again. Nothing
    between my heart
    and the floor.
    Except
    you

    Just beautiful
    I know the feeling completely

    Rick

  • kissofsun
    June 14

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    Solom

    And so heart felt. Your lines make my ache. The tears seem to bleed through the screne....eurging my own eyes to whell up with tears from the past. Your line breaks are perfect. and The reality behind your lines are overwhelming. At least for me, who has been burned by this thing called love so many times.
    Hugs....Kos

  • Saphire I agree pain does seem to find it's way to seep, Thank God for many of us we found the release through our pens to ease some of the pain, Have missed you here latly

  • this is really good
    • Thanks. Pain seems to know how to paint itself, does it not? Thanks for stopping in to read! Marie
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