I wonder what it's like for you
to notice that all the fun times
that were just so carefree and
passed far too quickly for you
Were all the creations of
a single state of mind
that exists only for
the absorbing and
enjoyments of
your mind
your body
and
yourself
So I wonder what it's like for you
to look back now on one such time
and recall how similar it was
to all those other wonderful
times and places, seeing now
how each time was just really
the same selfless, timeless,
void full of nothing but
wonder excitement and
perhaps peace and
bliss for all
eternity
why not go there again?
now you could if you wanted to
just remember, and fall back
onto the times that was and
I wonder what it's like...
Author notes
whee
you can call me crazy but tell me why you think so.....
Comments
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All happiness and no sadness? Weird...can you call that living? Still, enjoyed the flow and the arrangement of the first two groupings of stanzas and how they pointed down to the last. Very effective.
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oh, wait oops i lied i have read ur poetry before...ne way still just as good i realy like this it reminds me of a past relationship i had...o im ranting again arent i...
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Lol I like how this poem was all deep and profound and in the author's notes it's just like "whee".
Haha. It is interesting when you look back on times, be it happy or sad, what you tend to come up with after the fact.. -
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haha thanks, glad you enjoyed the notes too...
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