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my

my fingers dance.
to the lance.
my fingers dance.

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  • blackday
    May 31, 2008

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    I'm not sure how deep this is, but I'm weirdly attracted to this poem. I don't know if it's crap or actually good. haha


  • AngelEyes13
    May 27, 2008

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    wow. Three lines. It's kinda like that poem we read in my English class that was only seven lines but they had thirty minutes of explaining it. I like it!