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F, I, R, E, D

Ink blots across me
As you hit it
F, I, R, E, D
Is punched
My body
Poisened by you

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Hope this is ok

A contest entry

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  • Poco Loco
    June 1, 2008

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    Pretty deep i would say. YOu can definately feel the emotion in it. No i quite liked it actually. Good luck bro!
    xxx


  • blackday
    May 31, 2008

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    Hmmm. This wasn't that deep to me, but I can tell there is a real emotional connection with this poem.