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In My Cacoon

If I first appear to you like I'm a dumb bitch
When, then should I reveal the truth,
that I am internally rich?

You like me when I'm an airhead,
You like me when I'm spiritually unfed,
You like me when I appear mentally dead.

Can there ever be a defined limit to my giving?
I went from independant, to inter-dependant,
to co-dependant living.

Is ther a such thing as the introverted-metamorphosizing
of a butterfly?
Going from a beautiful, colorful, enchanted creature,
wisdom endowed by all, that begins to die.

Trapped in an external womb, like a diety, neh,
lying dead in a tomb
i'm going back to my cacoon
Is it too late, or is it too soon?
        ONLY GOD KNOWS!

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  • Virginia Logsdon
    July 4, 2008
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    aWESOME POETRY!


  • Starstruck132
    July 4, 2008
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    good

    a good poem, you showed us your true self.


  • Brazos silver member
    May 25, 2008

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    Sounds like someone doesn't appreciate all that he has. Would he really prefer a worm living in a dark cacoon to a wonderful, radiant, colorful butterfly flying free?

    The pitiable part is that often the stupidity of others causes us to have self-doubts about ourselves.

    "Is it too late, or is it too soon?
    ONLY GOD KNOWS"!

    Food for thought here, Eli, and a very good write.

    Brazos