Steamy, hot, wet, throbbing
Brown sugar lined with Pink Marmalade
Ooh Sooo Sweet...
Rhythumically performing a dance of seduction
Preparing for the Master of Ceremonies to
extravagantly grace its entrance
Debuting: is the world premier
"A NIGHT OF PLEASURE" thats beginning right here
My hips wind
My nana cries
for the Grandmaster V.I.P.
to enter these walls and conquer ecstasy
This is just an invitation
DO NOT BE ALARMED!
Consider yourself previously warned
In the event that this was an actual erotic episode
Simply insert Jimmy into Nana
then carefully unload
BAM, the universe explodes!
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Very uniquly penned
I enjoyed this very much, I do look forward to reading more of your astounding creations. Cleaver, and one of a kind.
Take care,
-theLady
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wow my orange marmalade on toast was never like this, a pretty wild poem .. your auntie recommended me to you , hugs
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I LOVE IT! Jimmy meets Nana, and the sky becomes filled with stars...
You really displayed your descripitive and metaphorical side in this write, I'd love to read more like this. Oh, and did I mention that it is very HOT!!! as well?
This would also make a very nice "Spoken Word" piece, with you shouting it from a stage somewhere.
I'm glad that you have unwrapped yourself, and let us see and enjoy you, KEEP'EM COMING!
Brazos
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That was different...
unique...
very unique...
innovative...
you've the touch of brilliance...
Galaxy2
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haha this made me laugh. good write and good imagery.
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I would love to hear you at a Slam. You've got a sense of rythmn and your words need to be heard. I can hear the laughter and how this is a dance with the absurd. What is important here is that you do it very well and manage to cast a magical spell even while playing with emcee role to the main show. This nicely, just by itself explodes.
Love, Tom B.
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Peaches I adore the way you have developed your own approach to sensuality...This is a excellent write need I say anymore...Just keep writing... Tia Novy..aquene
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