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A Vampire's Heart

She came from a country
Without any sun
Yet she smiled and laughed
With joy

A smart, simple girl
Who brightened the stars
In times when darkness
Controlled

And when she met him
He who was darkest
There came something between them
Like fire

A man without soul
No flare in his eyes
Just spark, and sharp teeth
That pierced

He saw she was sunshine
So he couldn't touch
A bloodthirsty creature
As he

Yet he took her for dating
And watched her light up
She loved him to death
Literally

It took quite a while
To find every answer
And some, still blank
And lifeless

There would always be danger
And uncertain risks
To a love drenched in blood
Like theirs

If you can manage to capture
A vampire's heart
You are one special girl
Indeed.

Author notes

Just a weird little something. Hope it's enjoyable, whatever it is. -_^
Heart,
Cj

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  • Mishi-Ragdoll
    May 27, 2008

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    Daaaaaaayum i have to give you super kudos for this poem my dear. being a vampire myself, i thought you did an excellent job. it even sounds like a good storyline for a story. i loved it.


  • kyuuketsuki ai
    May 25, 2008
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    ^_^ nice, hannah. Kind of a story within a poem. very random. I liked it.