Keys pounding
Like a heart
Racing across the keyboard
Telling my story with
words of creative art
Author notes
prompt: typewriter fingers 20 words or less
image credit:www.angelkitty.jp
A contest entry
- 20 words or less [open all day] by blackday.
700 points, ended May 31, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Eh. Not bad. I can appreciate this one I guess. The rhyme of art & heart, not the most creative but it worked.
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May you continue to tell your story with words. Well done. Juls
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Beautiful words..may your fingers forever 'pound'
All the best!
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Nice simile of pounding keyboard like a heart. I enjoyed the rhyme a lot Very creative poem. Thanks for sharing
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great poem
great write and also a cute girl in the pic mee yow kitty lol oh and also also .. you say alot here and describe fully in few words
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this is interesting hun! lol love the imagery in this 
its great
much love, christina
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