I'm sure you don't know me at all
And and please let me tell you why
You've only seen the mask I wear
All you know about me is lies
Sometimes I cry myself to sleep
Yes, it's true - I miss you that much
I cry whenever I hear rain
'Cause it reminds me of your touch
I tried to save you and I failed
You pushed me away when I tried
That girl you knew to be me
She's gone, she's deceased, she died
Instead risen from her is me
The girl you've told me that you hate
But you're the one who made "me" leave
You are the one who sealed my fate
So here I am, the gloves are off
You are looking at the real me
Am I girl that you hoped would come?
Is it all you thought it would be?
A contest entry
- You Don't Know Me... by artisticxpoetry.
900 points, ended May 31, 2008, 10 entries
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Comments
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"And and please let me tell you why
"...I don't think that is right, but its the only real mistake I saw, and judging on what you said...it was pretty heartfelt and beautiful. there is one problem tho, you have not followed the rules :[ So I don't think you are able to win.
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