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Empty Love

I see you flirt, you take them to bed
Drunk with no judgement
Because of you
They hang from a single thread

You pull them in
And suck them dry
Never stopping to wonder
If its all a sin

But do you know how much it hurts
To be told so many lies
Just to get your ego stroked
Just to lift their skirts

Do you know how much I hurt
When I see you with one
One of your pleasure pawns
I need answers to the questions you always divert

You tell me they are just empty pleasure
Empty love
With no hearts to harm
But you don't have a heart to measure

Try to look through my eyes
For just a minute
Feel the pain of abandonment
My smile is just a disguise

The pain I feel
Is because of you
If I told you I loved you
Would you know it was real

Love is never empty.

Author notes

I chose option #3. I could be your rabid squirrel.

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  • Theory Of The Lost
    June 20, 2008

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    WOW very very strong write, very well written, great word choice, it had a great flow. It tells a powerful and emotional story very just wow great write and good luck again this was just amazing!!!