Solitude,
flowing as waves,
across a rose tipped sky.
Gathering momentium,
as clouds drift in lazy luxury,
towards a moon clad night.
Noisy chatter silenced by
a cordial song of the nighingale,
he stands alone.
Just clear notes sung
in the evening dusk,
sharp and intune.
Broken silence,
stilled once more,
as intruder and song bird become one.
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Wonderful imagery in this delightful poem. I like the use of birds in here. It reminds me of when I go outside and I'm mad for some reason. I here a song from a bird and my sorrows such drift away. You had me actually hearing those songs in my mind and made me at peace from my sad mood. Beautiful write.
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Truly an amazing piece, had to read it several times. Thanks for the share.
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To capture an image and place it in the minds eye shows wisdom and understanding. This is such a poem Thank you
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Thank you, I am delighted that you enjoyed it
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This is a very interesting poem about the basis of what nature is. This is a peaceful calming write that seems to come along to rarly these days... Its very well written, I can almost hear the beat to this poem in my head, perhaps it can become a song sometime.
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Thank you for your kind comments
As always, very much appreciated
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I realy admire this, it's beautiful. The imagery made me wish I was there. I realy like this. It is very clear that you have talent, I'm glad you use it to the fullest. This was without a doubt a wonderful write. Hope all is well
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You are very kind
Thank you
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Forgot to applaud you!
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Thank you
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Very Peaceful
I think it is very important to tell you that I was in a funk all day, but after reading this and imagining the scene you painted, I really did calm down and I feel a great deal better. Thank you for writing such a great piece! I am quite tempted to print this out to keep forever!
"Just clear notes sung
in the evening dusk,
sharp and intune."
Simply Amazing.
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I am delighted that you enjoyed it, many thanks for your kindness
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Amazing :)!
I think it's really good! I love the imagery and its flow; sounds very natural.
My favourite lines are:
"as clouds drift in lazy luxury,
towards a moon clad night."
Very powerful and original.
Excellent Work. This poem is inspiring and brings out the nature's beauty thoroughly Vey beautiful thoughts
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Thank you very much for your lovely comments, appreciated as always...
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nice
I like how it incorporates many aspects of nature to portray solitude, as if solitude isn't about being by yourself, but in nature and enjoying it's beauty, both visual and auditory. You've done very well, keep writing. -
wow!~ first time comming across ur poetry and from the look of this awesome write..i doubt it will be the last..very impressive..beautiful piece..just the right word.and the flow is too perfect..
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Thank you for your lovely comments, as always, very much appreciated
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Yes indeed the relationship of the self with the surrounding has its own place while you depict the self and to relate the surrounding through it..your inside is lost but the outside is touched in it..the immagery is wonderfully depicted by the heart of the poet while describing the story of the solitude..the music of the heart is combined with the scenario of the nature..I love this wonderful piece..well done..
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This is a beautiful and soothing nature write. You have used some wonderful imagery also. "Gathering momentium,
as clouds drift in lazy luxury,
towards a moon clad night"
I especially enjoyed that stanza. Nice! Blessings, Patty
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Many thanks for your kindness
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beautiful thoughts on the subject.
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Thank you
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Ms Cutie, you don't write often enough (for me). You are always at your best when absorbed in nature. (Thank you.)
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