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How Life Can Drain a Soul

What is one more day of rain.

  I know the moisture will soak through.

Letting the rain fall between the groves.

  There is grass and weeds in need below.

What the heck is one more day.

 

I have felt the heat of the sun.

  As it makes my frame snap with time.

Weathering up and turning gray.

  Wharped sides twist and fall.

What the heck is one more day

 

The cold air gives me a chill.

  When the snow falls,

It more than fills my build.

  How the wind whistels as it goes.

What the heck is one more day.

 

There are nice days, I can't complain.

  When my friend come and stay with me.

All the birds in the rafters, how they sing.

  The others little ones, with their babies they bring.

What the heck is one more day.

 

 

  5-25-2008 

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  • Samplette gold member
    May 29, 2008

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    I like your interesting take on the picture. I know I am ready for some sunshine around here. Rain rain take a break..... Well written. Thank you for entering.
    Sam


  • craftyangel43
    May 25, 2008
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    Very well written and a good take on the prompt as well. Good luck in the contest.
    Crafty

  • Flamecaster
    May 25, 2008
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    Good...good luck...