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More Women

More Women

What is good to most in ones
Is bad in twos to some.
But multiples to others seems
To be good as it comes.
I have watched the news a lot
And my poor brain is swimmin'
Why is it bad when just like me
The Mormons want more women?

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  • Mairi bheag gold member
    August 19, 2008
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    On the other hand, I can't think of anything I'd hate more than polyandry!


    • LarryATilander
      August 19, 2008
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      Poly and dry?

      I was thinkin' that was a comment on the surfacing and hair dying thing. Maybe it's related. Dying one's hair leads to.... well, the other. Blow drying could be related, or if you prefer, being blown ashore, but not Dinah Shore who is a dinosaur. It's 05:00, my brain is swimmin'. G'night.


  • darlintlc silver member
    May 26, 2008
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    Ha! Some humor in this one...although it is a very real subject and a life style of many. Liked the way you didn't yell in anger but stated your opinion very clearly! Alot of women would find it helpful to be one of many if it wasn't done behind their backs!

    Thanks for entering and good luck!!
    darlintlc


  • toomysterious
    May 25, 2008
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    Very different. Nice twist. Adding another question to what is right or wrong.


    • LarryATilander
      May 25, 2008
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      Like I say,

      It just depends on where you stand what is good.
      Eating cats and dogs? Depends where you are.
      Eating meat at all? Depends.
      Eating Pork? Ask around.
      Eating cows? Holy in spots.
      Eating other people? You hear stories.
      Etc. etc. etc. And that's just a nip off the old food taboo list.


  • LAPoe gold member
    May 25, 2008

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    I was reading along and was thinking? where the hell
    is he going with this????? then the last line hit like
    a ton of funny bricks!!!! Yes.... Excellent!!!!!!!that's what this is!!!!!! if they can do it why not you? but just remember that its not all fun and games...
    it's three or four or ten times the PMS also..

    sorry to bust your multiple bubble

    laurie

    • LarryATilander
      May 25, 2008
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      I think PMS can be tamed

      if you bring 'em young (Google 'Brigham Young' then Bring'Um Young) enough.

      • Mairi bheag gold member
        August 19, 2008
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        There speaks someone who has never had it!


        • LarryATilander
          August 19, 2008

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          Never had which?

          I'm so confused. Never had PMS? No, but I loved the Star Trek episode where Captain Kirk did. I discoverd the cure though.


      • LAPoe gold member
        May 25, 2008
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        You know I think they have it wrong.. it's not Mormons ... it's Mor'moms.. bring me Mor'moms
        I need to breed mulitple mothers!!! oh and I hope you know that premenstral girls are illegal???

        L.


        • LarryATilander
          May 25, 2008
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          That, My Dear;

          Depends upon where one is and what belief system one follows and is the whole point of this contest and my poem.

          They don't wash properly and consequently don't taste good anyhow.

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