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Angel Tears

Disasterous miracles,
pacified dreams,
scattered remnants
amoungst sparkling stars.

Praying to silent heathens
that someone would hear the cries.

Blood on porcilean floor tile
tells the stories of the world,
how it will all be washed away

By an Angel's tears.

Author notes

I've been dying to use this prompt.... So I did ^^
'Broken mosaic tiles lay beneath her feet'

Danneh<3

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  • Blooming Poet
    June 5, 2008

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    It is hard to tell a story without basic prounounns but you did not appear to have much of a problem. Great work.