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Lover's Eyes

Blue eyes search, a midnight rendezvous,
Under forest canopy, clouds hiding the moon from view.
Inky shadows move, two souls in a dance of love,
Their only company, an owl watching from the tree above.

Shirts are lifted overhead and pants are dropped below their knees,
Whispers escape into the night as hands roam and fingers tease.
Kisses tracing invisible lines from lips to neck to breast,
Nibble, licking, sucking, kissing; pleasing the way a lover knows best.

Fingers explore and juices flow as his mouth moves below her hips,
Muffled sounds and cries escape as pleasure comes from playing lips.
She’s had enough teasing play as she pulls him up to her,
Bodies held against each other as their passions begin to stir.

Now the time has come, to consummate the night,
He places himself against her with his passion at its height.
As he enters her with gentle thrust she sighs in exstasy,
A steady rhythm they move in giving in to their bodies plea.

Whimpers now escape her lips as he pushes deep inside,
And in his eyes pleasure shows that even the night cant hide.
Their bodies now move as one as the fire begins to burn,
Their breaths now are erratic as toward a climax they turn.

With an arched back and muffled scream the orgasm washes over her,
Holding him tight between her legs his ending she tries to spur.
With the final thrust he forces in as far as he can go.
The fires released inside her as he lets his juices flow.

There they lay their bodies spent holding each other near,
Staring now into the eyes of the ones they hold so dear.
The clouds part and drift away exposing star filled skies
Whispers of love are said in silence staring into hazel eyes.

Author notes

My and my friend Sarah had made an agreement. She would write a most upbeat and happy poem and I would write an erotic one. She wrote her poem a few days later so I had to write mine. This is the poem I came up with. I used the eyes as my focal point (no pun intended) of this poem because of how sensual they can be. The first and last lines tie that up. For this being the first time I have ever even attempted to write something erotic I think I did alright. This poem was written April 17th 2008.

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  • Pretty Britty
    September 22
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    Wow, this was written in like, May?
    It's really been that long?

    Mah lawdy

  • Darc Fragile Rose
    July 18
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    holy damn...

    that was amazing hun very well done great job keep it up


  • dawn.of.juliet
    June 30

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    im twitching.. wow that was like amazing...
    very umm O.o descriptive
    WOW... ><
    thanks for entering

  • ennovy silver member
    June 11

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    Wow I love the reality of cravings , needs in these verses. You enticed your readers to keep reading...very good.....thanks for entering...Novy & Brazos

  • Poetic Obscenity
    June 10

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    That's ever so beautiful. It leaves me with a mix of emotions. You're an amazing writer and this is a fantastic piece.


    • Uasal Laoch Aingeal gold member
      June 10
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      Thank you. This poem came from a dare and took me forever to write. erotic poems is just not something I can do.

  • Angelflower Greeters member
    June 8

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    Wow.. you did a wonderful job hun.. This was really umm.. Sensual.. the emotion in this was really soft and loving.. And the imagery..lol.. well it worked.. great job.. I loved it..

    Angel

  • Cerbie20
    May 25
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    good read, i liked it. the rhyming was great too. good job!


  • Pretty Britty
    May 25

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    DANNY WROTE THIS POEM FOR ME
    EVEN THOUGH HE'D NEVER ADMIT IT
    DANNY ONCE WANTED TO BE WITH MEEEEE

    AND THIS PROVES IT!!!
    WOOO!!!
    Kudos for Danny!

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