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soft

she steps lightly
smelling fresh from the herbs of of bath

wraped in cottton soft
she pours her first cup

walks to the deck to view the new day
and marvels at the sweet sounds of morning

the sun has awaken early
and the dew is still kissing its
last goodbys


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just thoughts on this beautiful day

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  • lost
    October 24, 2009

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    i get a magnificent piece of imagery from this i love reading your poems; they make me so happy


  • kareneisenlord gold member
    November 24, 2008

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    Ah, lovely and sweet!

    I felt refreshed and renewed reading this. Thank you for writing and sharing this with us. It is very uplifting. Karen


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    November 9, 2008
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    Just a wonderful scenario you have sketched here with so much beauty of the words and immages as well..beautiful indeed ..well done...


  • Luce
    June 20, 2008
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    Nice thoughts and well put
    The dew is still kissing it`s last goodbyes.


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    May 26, 2008
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    early summer gives us these optimistic feelings , love this raggy xxx peter


  • Arizona Sunset
    May 25, 2008
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    beautiful imagery and wonderful poem...blessings always~ Trisha


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    May 25, 2008

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    A great immagery my friend..the scenario is powerfully visual..makes a sketch of the life of the morning ..love it..well done....

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