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open wounds

I know your trying to help
But your just making things worse
I know you want to help me through this hell
But your blessings are a curse
I know your hearts in the right place
But you need to use your head
I know that expression on your face
But you should have listened to what I said
I know your pain
But I don’t regret a word
I know there’s nothing for you to gain
But you should have learned
I know you want to walk me through
But you need to stop soon
I know you think I need you
But you’re just pouring salt into an open wound



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  • Excellent

    People usually say the wrong thing when trying to make one feel better. Of some one who has passed,
    "My she looks good" " Looks like she is just sleeping"
    To my grand daughter who fell three floors down an elevator shaft" You had a guardian angel" "Where was she I landed on concret".


  • Lagrimas
    June 16, 2008

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    Simple really

    People never recognize when they are cause more pain. It seems we are fated to hurt each both on purpose and on accident... what a shame. But this is a nice write. Thanx for sharing it.


  • babygirl13
    June 3, 2008

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    I love when u say "pour a salt into open wounds" its very discriptive of how hurt you are. I really like this poem!


  • starting.over gold member
    May 26, 2008

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    *cringes*
    ouch! Sorry for your pain, but this is a wonderful poem!!

    Mylee